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This article is said to be like an essay rather than a Wikipedia article, and the "in various countries" section takes up more than explaining a jury trial and informing. There should also be a section on how the jurors are chosen. The countries can be confined into a category of 'jury trials by country" and include brief differences in international juries instead.
Although this article is short, it contains a lot of information and examples that can be broken into categories and headings. The Latino American Trauma Experiences sections can be separated to include more specific categories for each example.
There is unnecessary information presented in the history portion, such as the statistics section. The article can be condensed to include more information on the trails and their effects instead try to include other sections to convince readers about the Oregon Trail.
The article also contains excessive details that are not for a general audience.
The title has a spelling error, and the article shows jargon for an important piece of rhetoric in law. The article could take out unnecessary topics to change the style to the informational style of Wikipedia.
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Jury Trial:
- There is additional information given to explain further what certain topics can do
- For example, it talks about a trial order, then someone adds who can issue the order
- Taking out informal jargon and many grammatical and clarification errors
- Long lead (paragraph) is only a sentence but is followed by so much more information. Should instead be broken up into a separate category after the lead
Adverse childhood experiences among Hispanic and Latino Americans:
- Fixes minor formatting to fit into Wikipedia standard
- Ex: not using Latinx and not including an acronym in the title
- Overall, no major edits