Nokia, Finland on Wikipedia
Wikipedia is filled with a large number of articles that have been written by experienced and dedicated writers, due to which, the articles have become extremely developed. The highly developed articles have a small room for improvement and editing. Since I have great amount of interest in cities and islands, thus, I chose to go for an article that was based on a city, such as, Nokia. For this task, I visited the “Nokia, Finland” page on Wikipedia, and found three major aspects of it that worth commenting on: Information, references and External Links.
The article was not up to date, due to which, I believe that there is a great room of improvement for this article as ever year some changes arrive in the physical structures of cities and countries. The last update was made on 31st March 2016, which means that the information has not been updated for the past 9 months. This is why, I feel that the updated information lacks within the article. Overall, the article has been written in the formal language but it still needs edits for grammar and use of words. The article describes the history in details but the later developments have not been described so well.
The articles on advanced cities like the New York City are highly developed and up to date, but the article on small city like Nokia is neither well developed nor well referred. There are very few references of the Information given within the article. Also, there are only two external links, which are not sufficient at all. This is why, this article needs editing and improvement as it requires more detailed information about Nokia as well as needs more links and references to assure authenticity of content. I suggest that there should be information about “Language, Culture, Customs, and Economy of the Nokia city.”
Link of the article
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nokia,_Finland
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