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Wikipedia's Norse mythology article for ENGL9876.99

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Analysis of Article

have a better description of talking about the gods and goddess. use other nouns then using beings all the time. i decided to revise my paragraph the way i did because i believed the original paragraph was to long, and i felt like it needed to be shorten. i loved the fact it gave a definition of explaining the word and telling people about Norse mythology who doesn't know anything about it. I did fell there were some gaps missing to the paper that could of been fixed or more things that was added to it. overall the paper to me i felt was a bit stuffy and at the same time it was loud and kept my attention. the tone was good and i liked how it was just wrote,but certain things and certain words could of been used less of.

Reading List

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• Bek-Pederson K. The Norns In Old Norse Mythology . Edinburg: Dunedin Academic Press Limited; 2011. Ipswich, MA. Accessed October 26, 2015.
• McBroom K. What We Get from Norse Mythology. Ipswich, MA. Accessed October 26, 2015.[2]
• Korstanje M. Examining the Norse mythology and the archetype of Odin: The inception of Grand Tour. Ipswich, MA. Accessed October 26, 2015.[ 3]
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Lindow J. Norse Mythology : A Guide To The Gods, Heroes, Rituals, And Beliefs Ipswich, MA. Accessed October 26, 2015.

Revised paragraph from article

Original

Norse Mythology Consists of Tales of Various deities, being and heroes derived from numerous sources

from both and after the pagan period including medieval manuscripts, .

Revised

Norse Mythology consist tales of Various deities, Creatures

and heroes derived from numerous sources,from both before

and after the pagan period.

Original Contribution

There was no need to add any new information to the paper it was just fine the way it was, except to revising the definition. I really liked this article and what the person was trying to say. i learned a lot about Norse mythology by reading this. there was no need for any contribution. it just needed a small few touches up.

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