 | This is a user sandbox of Hsrkim. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Community Development article: Although there was an in-text citation in paragraph 2, it should still be cited appropriately. Paragraph 3 needs citation, the section "Different Approraches" are missing citations, and the section "History" is also missing citations. Links to several words and organizations could be added and some of the current links are not working. The facts are referenced from recent, peer-reviewed Journals, and credible organizations but as stated before, several facts are missing references.
Photovoice article: After reviewing the article, I have noticed that the facts were referenced from peer-reviewed journals and presentations from appropriate meetings. However as already noted, there are some areas which requires citation. The links in the article all work, the article has been updated last in 2015 and the information does not seem too out of date (infromation from 1988 to 2015), but recent information could be added. The article is relevant to the article topic and has effectively showed what it is, who uses it, and how it came to be but could use more information in the other subsections
Selected Article: Photovoice
Since this article has some information, I was thinking about reviewing the information, adding more neutral voices and more information from credible sources.
Sources that may be used:
http://strive.lshtm.ac.uk/sites/strive.lshtm.ac.uk/files/wang%20concept%20and%09%20methodology.pdf
http://www.kon.org/urc/v8/scacciaferro.html
http://libres.uncg.edu/ir/uncg/f/R_Strack_Engaging_2004.pdf
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4933584/
http://teamlab.usc.edu/Photovoice%20Literature%20Review%20(FINAL).pdf