Hiscat

I'm the person who is from the South Korea. In Korea one of the remarkable duties for men is going to the army. I already finished duty of mine. When I was in army my role was a sapper who treats the explosive to block the road and interrupt the enemies's tanks to march in to the city. My major is aviation maintenance, so I am interested in the aeronautics. Especially about aircraft engineering and avionics. And I like to play bowling and keep going to the bowling lanes every week.

The part that I'm interested in encyclopedia, is about the natural science. To be specific, weather, physics, electronics and so on. These science parts are related with my aviation maintenance major.

Article Evaluation

Introduction

I am interested in the KT Corporation( Korean telephone company) which is my dad is working as a managing director. My father has been working in KT Corporation since 1988. However, I haven't search about that. I visited the KT Corporation page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on Dead link, Lack of citation, Commercial.

Dead Link

In the references of this article, KT Corporation has 44 citations. However, some citation can not use for the citation. Moreover the latest reference date was 2013-09-30. When I clicked the link of the references, lot of link was closed. This deactivated links were not reliable sources any more, and it need to update.

Lack of citation

In the information of the KT Corporation, there are some information was written with out citations. To make an article reliable, the article requires the reliable reference citations. However information of KT Corporation has some missed citations. For example, in the History and milestones of KT Corporation, I could find out a lot of lack of citations. To make the readers more reliable, this article requires more reference citations.

Biased sources (Commercial)

The some of information about the KT Corporation in Wikipedia page was biased. For example, in this article explains that the KT Corporation is the largest telephone company of the South Korea. In this part this article was biased. To be specific, in this explanation it doesn't have any citation. However, in KT Corporation page on Wikipedia explains with out any citations. Moreover, on the KT Corporation Wikipedia page, the information is mainly explains about their businesses, services, sponsor sports teams and their investment with some citations. This means that by unreliable sources, some of information was biased.

Conclusion

In conclusion, it is fact that the KT Corporation is one of the South Korea's major company. However some information and references are not reliable. To make more reliable for the KT Corporation searchers, it seems like to fix some improvement point.