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Evaluating Articles and Sources
editThe article evaluated will be Kartemquin Films
- The article was well written and I did not find anything particularly distracting. The only thing that I took note was in the section "Recent works". This section is not listed chronologically.
- I believe this article is neutral. A lot of "praise" that the article gives to the organization is rooted in fact such as number of awards.
- The other two founders, Jerry Temaner and Stan Karter, seemed underrepresented.
- All three citations work properly.
- All facts are cited by independent, credible sources.
- There is no information regarding what the organization has been up to this year.
- There does not seem to be any conversation within the talk page on this article.
- The article is a part of multiple projects, the WikiProject Illinois, the WikiProject Chicago, WikiProject Organizations, and the WikiProject Film. All projects rate this article as a start-class and of low importance in terms of urgency to expand.
Immerman's Angels Annotated Bibliography
editList of sources for group project.
This source has valuable statistical data that can be added to the wikipedia page. This data pertains to the year 2012 and can be a part of a measuring stick to show the growth of the organization. in 2012, Imerman Angels had a database of more than 4,000 survivor mentors had has made over 8,000 matches in more than 65 countries. [1]
2017 marked the second year of Ben Borstein position as CEO. Ben Borstein is a Harvard Law and Business pedigree who has survived cancer three times. This source also gives hard numbers to the size of the company in terms of employees, mentors and connections made as of 2017. Source also includes various personal information of the organization's CEO but this additional information is not relevant to the overall article. [2]
Immerman's Angels Article Contribution Draft
edit- ^ CNN, By Allie Torgan,. "Pairing 'angels' with cancer patients - CNN". CNN. Retrieved 2017-10-03.
{{cite news}}:|last=has generic name (help)CS1 maint: extra punctuation (link) CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link) - ^ "Sunday Sitdown: Ben Bornstein matches cancer victims to 'angels'". Chicago Sun-Times. Retrieved 2017-10-16.