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Article Evaluation

The article I chose is on Test Anxiety among students who attend schools. There are a lot of references in the article and all the links in the article work and provide the reader with rich definitions. The definitions give the reader a better understanding of the broad topic of test anxiety and how those words relate to the topic. I noticed that the article provides many theories on test anxiety but does not really explain the deep meaning of it and it rather just gives a long confusing definition which I believe is something that should be fixed. The article contains a content page which is a good idea and everything relates straight forward to the topic. Every link I clicked on lead me to another article for a more better understanding of the topic. The article really explains well the topic of test anxiety and provides a good amount of information.

The Hat

What I plan to contribute to this article is more information and a more specific understanding of The Hat. I would like to add more images too of the food and the place to make the article more interesting. To provide the customers with more help a rating of The Hat would be good to add to this article so people can see how good their place is.

Bibliography

-The Hat.com The Hat is a well known restaurant in southern California and are known specifically for their pastrami sandwiches. Starting local from San Gabriel Valley, customers have come along to consume 13 to 15 tons of pastrami a week.

Rough Draft/Outline for The Hat

Introduction

• When and where the restaurant was established
• Up to this day how many of them have been established
• Major signature food?

First Body Paragraph

• How did the industry start?
• Owners names and how small description.
• How far did they expand?

Second Paragraph

• Information on how they expanded
• Why and how they expanded
• How much profit have they made

Third Paragraph

• What they are mostly known for
• How popular have they become over the years
• What type of customers they get

Fourth Paragraph

• Reviews about the customers
• Atmosphere across the industry
• Ratings