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- Tibetan Terrier Club of America (ttca-online.org)
- PetMD
The Tibetan Terrier is a medium-size breed of dog that originated in Tibet.[1] Despite its name, it is not a member of the terrier group. The breed was given its English name by European travelers due to its resemblance to known terrier breeds.[2] The Tibetan name for the breed, Tsang Apso, roughly translates to "shaggy or bearded ("apso") dog, from the province of Tsang". Some old travelers' accounts refer to the dog as Dokhi Apso or "outdoor" Apso, indicating a shaggy or bearded working dog which lives outdoors.
History edit
According to legend, Tibetan Terriers were kept purebred for over 2000 years.[3] Tibetan Terriers were kept as good luck charms, mascots, watchdogs, herding dogs, and companions. They were also used to retrieve articles that fell down mountain sides.[3]
Also known as the "Holy Dogs of Tibet," Tibetan Terriers were never sold, only given as gifts by monks to promote good fortune. As such, the early history of the breed is linked to only a handful of foundation dogs.
The first Tibetan Terrier known to have lived in Europe was acquired by Dr. A.R.H Greig. Dr. Greig was gifted "Bunit" (a female gold and white Tibetan Terrier) upon successfully in 1922 completing surgery on a patient in Tibet and returned with the dog to her home in England. In 1924 Dr. Greig would breed the first litter of puppies in Europe after acquiring "Rajah." [4]
This new breed briefly held the name Lhasa Terriers, but in 1930 was recognized by the Kennel Club of India under the current name of Tibetan Terriers.
Dr. Henry and Mrs. Alice Murphy of Great Falls, Virginia were the first Americans to bring the breed to the United States in 1956. But it wasn't until 1973 that the American Kennel Club would add Tibetan Terriers to the non-sporting group as a recognized breed.[5]
Dr. A.R.H. Greig of England brought the first Tibetan Terrier to Europe in 1922.[4] She was given a gold and white female puppy named "Bunti" after successfully performing an operation on a patient in Tibet. After acquiring a second male, "Rajah," Dr. Greig established a kennel and began to breed them.
The first litter was born in 1924 and were registered as Lhasa Terriers. In 1930, the Kennel Club of India changed the breed's name to Tibetan Terrier. The first Tibetan Terriers in the US were imported in 1956 by Dr. Henry and Mrs. Alice Murphy of Great Falls, Virginia. In 1973, the American Kennel Club recognized the breed, classifying it as part of the non-sporting group.[1]
Tibetan Terriers are related to and have contributed to the development of other breeds, including the Shih Tzu, Lhasa Apso, Tibetan Spaniel,[6] Polish Lowland Sheepdog,[7] among others.
Appearance edit
The Tibetan Terrier is a medium-sized dog whose defining feature is a double coat (often shaggy in appearance). The double coat with normally described as woolly underneath and a more fine, lengthy topcoat that can be described as akin to human hair. The breed's distinct coat can vary widely in color including black, gold, white, brown, and many combinations thereof. The breed is on the lower sized end of the medium-sized breed spectrum with a typical weight of 20 to 24 pounds and about 15" tall at the shoulder.[1] Tibetan Terriers are often described as study and stout dogs with large, flat almost snowshoe like paws.[8] The eyes of the breed are dark and set fairly far apart on the head. The nose is typically black (sometimes brown) and sits upon a medium muzzle. The ears are V-shaped with feather-like hair that hangs loosely adorning the ears that sit high upon their head. The tail is typically held in a curl above their back and will have similarly feathered hair.[9]
The Tibetan Terrier is a powerful, medium-sized dog of square proportions, with a shaggy coat. They vary widely in height and weight,[10] ranging from 14–16 in (35–41 cm) and is 18–30 lb (8–14 kg), with 20–24 lb (9.5–11 kg) preferred for either sex. All weights are acceptable if in proportion to the size. Fully grown, the Tibetan Terrier resembles a miniaturized Bearded Collie. The head is moderate, with a strong muzzle of medium length, and a skull neither rounded nor flat. The eyes are large, dark, and set fairly far apart. The V-shaped drop ears are well-feathered, and should be set high on the sides of the skull. Although the preferred colour for the nose is black, in showdogs, they are also sometimes brown. The body is well-muscled and compact. The length of the back should be equal to the height at the withers, giving the breed its typical square look. The tail is set high, well-feathered, and carried in a curl over the back. One of the more unusual features of the Tibetan Terrier is their broad, flat feet with hair between the toes, which are ideal for climbing mountains, acting as natural snow shoes.
The hair of the Tibetan Terrier has a long growth cycle. As a result, their coat grows quite long and pet animals will require occasional trimming.[11] They do not shed like dogs with shorter hair growth cycles, but rather slough hair at a rate similar to that of most humans. The exception is at approximately nine months when puppies slough their entire coat in advance of acquiring their adult coat. The double coat is profuse, with a warm undercoat and a topcoat which has the texture of human hair. It should not be silky or curled, but wavy is acceptable. Long and thick, it is shown natural, but should not be so long as to touch the floor, as is typical in breeds such as the Lhasa Apso or Maltese. A fall of hair covers the face and eyes, but long eyelashes generally prevent hair from getting in the Tibetan Terrier's eyes, and the breed has very good eyesight.
All colours are permissible, barring liver and chocolate, and none is preferred. Gold is the rarest. Tibetan Terriers are available in any combination of solid, parti-color, tricolor, brindle, or piebald, as long as the nose leather is black and the eyes and eye rims are dark.[12]
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Temperament edit
Tibetan Terriers are regarded as family-oriented dogs. They are highly adaptable to different living situations and are equally at home in both an apartment in the city or a farmhouse in the country. They are balanced between lively, playful, fun-loving dogs and low-key, relaxed couch potatoes.[8] They are good watchdogs for a family because they are suspicious of, but not aggressive or shy towards strangers. [9]
The breed can be both stubborn and very independent. They are quick learners, but get bored or deterred by repetition.[5] The breed can be manipulative and requires a relationship with human companions based upon respect.[8]
They are energetic and strong and do require regular exercise.[9]
The temperament has been one of the most attractive aspects of the breed since it was first established. They are amiable and affectionate family dogs, sensitive to their owners, and gentle with older children if properly introduced. As is fitting for a dog with origins as a watch dog, Tibetans tend to be reserved around strangers, but should never be aggressive nor shy with them. Though not prone to excessive barking, the Tibetan Terrier has an assertive bark.
Suitable for apartment living, the Tibetan is an energetic and strong dog, and needs regular exercise. The energy level of the Tibetan is moderate to high and its general nature is happy, active, lively, intelligent, and agile. As a result, they are well suited for dog sports such as agility. They are steadfast, determined, and clever, which can lead to them being stubborn. Tibetan Terriers are usually charming and loyal. Some dogs of this breed can often be guarding of their resources, which can make it hard to live with another pet. Tibetan Terriers are the perfect dog for an easy and relaxed life style with regular exercise involved.
Activities edit
The unique nature of thier large feet make Tibetan Terriers extremely adept at climbing or hiking mountain trails.[5] They also use thier feet well to open doors, hold toys, and to aid thier clever minds in problem-solving [8] in almost somewhat cat-like ways.
As noted good watch dogs they enjoy a good vantage point in the house where they can observe the comings and going out a window or door.[5]
They are enthusiastic, bright students who love to learn new things and can be well trained when they respect thier trainer/companion.[1][13]
The Tibetan Terriers can compete in dog agility trials, obedience, rally obedience, showmanship, flyball, tracking, and even herding events. Herding instincts and trainability can be measured at noncompetitive herding tests. Tibetan Terriers that exhibit basic herding instincts can be trained to compete in herding trials.[14]
Health edit
This hardy breed can live a long, healthy life and typically live beyond 12 years, with many reaching 15 or 16 years of age.[15]
A UK Kennel Club survey puts the average lifespan of the breed at 12 years. About one in five lives to 15 years or more, with the longest-lived Tibetan Terrier having lived to 18.25 years.[16] Though an athletic breed that has been bred for a natural look, the Tibetan Terrier is nonetheless susceptible to a variety of health problems, especially those related to the eyes and joints.[17] These problems can include canine hip dysplasia, luxating patella, progressive retinal atrophy, lens luxation, cataracts and heart murmurs. Many breeders recommend that dogs reach maturity before being spayed or neutered to help to offset chances of joint issues.[5]Tibetans also have a history of being somewhat allergic to dairy, wheat and grains. Because of these potential health conditions Tibetan Terrier clubs recommend purchasing from breeders who participate in eye and hip testing, such as the Canine Eye Registration Foundation (CERF) and Orthopedic Foundation for Animals (OFA).
In addition, Tibetan Terriers can carry the genetic disease canine neuronal ceroid lipofuscinosis, called Batten disease in humans. The first symptom of the disease is night blindness. Blindness and neurological signs such as epilepsy, motor abnormalities, dementia, and unexpected aggression will follow some years later.[18] The gene responsible for the disease in Tibetan Terriers was identified in 2009 and there is now a DNA test for it.[18][19] A German study showed that about 1/3 of Tibetan Terriers are carriers, but no affected dogs has been produced since the introduction of the DNA test as the German breed club requirements forbid carriers from being bred together.[18]
See also edit
- Dog of Osu
- Tibetan dog breeds
- Tibetan kyi apso
- Lhasa Apso
- Tibetan Mastiff
- Tibetan Spaniel
- Index of Tibet-related articles
References edit
- ^ a b c d American Kennel Club (2013). Get to know the Tibetan Terrier. Retrieved from http://www.akc.org/breeds/tibetan_terrier/index.cfm
- ^ GotPetsOnline.com (2013). Tibetan Terriers. Retrieved from http://www.gotpetsonline.com/pictures/gallery/dogs/terrier-dogs/tibetan-terriers/
- ^ a b Tibetan Terrier Club of America (2012). About the Breed: History. Retrieved from http://ttca-online.org/html/history.html
- ^ a b Reif, Jane (1996). The Tibetan Terrier book. Southfarm Press. ISBN 0-9672628-0-1.
- ^ a b c d e "Tibetan Terrier Dog Breed Information". American Kennel Club.
- ^ Pugnetti, Gino (15 November 1980). Simon & Schuster's Guide to Dogs. Simon & Schuster. p. 121. ISBN 9780671255275.
- ^ Dogs All-in-One For Dummies. Wiley. p. 532.
- ^ a b c d Welton, Michelle (7/21/2019). "Tibetan Terriers: What's Good About 'Em, What's Bad About 'Em". Your Pure Breed Puppy.
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- ^ Wikerd, Marjorie (2011). "Non-Sporting Group: Tibetan Terriers". AKC Gazette. 128 (3). American Kennel Club: 70.
- ^ Purina (2013). Breed Library: Tibetan Terrier. Retrieved from http://www.purina.com.au/owning-a-dog/dog-breeds/Tibetan-Terrier
- ^ American Kennel Club (2013). Tibetan Terrier: Breed Standards. Retrieved from http://www.akc.org/breeds/tibetan_terrier/breed_standard.cfm
- ^ "History - TTCA". The Tibetan Terrier Club of America. Retrieved 7/23/19.
{{cite web}}: Check date values in:|access-date=(help) - ^ Hartnagle-Taylor, Jeanne Joy; Taylor, Ty (2010). Stockdog Savvy. Alpine Publications. ISBN 978-1-57779-106-5.
- ^ "Health and Genetics - TTCA". Tibetan Terriers Club of America.
- ^ "Individual Breed Results for Purebred Dog Health Survey".
- ^ Discovery Communications, LLC. (2013). Animal Planet Tibetan Terrier Guide: Care and Health Retrieved from http://animal.discovery.com/breed-selector/dog-breeds/non-sporting/tibetan-terrier.html
- ^ a b c Kluth, S.; Eckardt, J.; Distl, O. (2014). "Selection response to DNA testing for canine ceroid lipofuscinosis in Tibetan terriers". The Veterinary Journal. 201 (3): 433–434. doi:10.1016/j.tvjl.2014.05.029. PMID 24929534.
- ^ http://www.offa.org/dnatesting/ncl.html%7C administered by the Orthopaedic Foundation for Animals (U.S.A.)
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