User:EstherM04/Choose an Article

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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

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Article title
Biodiversity
Article Evaluation
The article is written very well. However, the lead section of the article is lengthy and not concise. It doesn't focus on the definition and importance of biodiversity but rather the background the history of life. The claims are cited and are reliable.
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https://www.amnh.org/research/center-for-biodiversity-conservation/what-is-biodiversity

Option 2

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Article title

Biodiversity loss
Article Evaluation
The article is written very well. It has a lengthy lead section which can be written to be more concise, but the article contains a good amount of information with s
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https://conbio.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1046/j.1523-1739.2002.00530.x?casa_token=2sDY3YMid4QAAAAA%3AWUFI7bV3qhOQeTHCP5m6CXWVmtE3uTuLSpgL9_r7USsKjZ2u1zIzL9ccIYIEzKn7TB6S11myKNQ1Eeo

Option 3

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Article title
Human impact on the environment
Article Evaluation
The article is very well written. It has a lot of cited information. The article can we written to be more clear and concise and not all sections are well developed and pertain to the point like fast fashion on the environment.
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https://royalsocietypublishing.org/doi/abs/10.1098/rspb.2006.3551