User:Ereed23/Battle of Ringgold Gap/Dcb1986 Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing? Ereed23
Link to draft you're reviewing: Battle of Ringgold Gap

Lead evaluation

The lead reflects new content, and is fairly concise. The editor removed some unnecessary material and did some copy editing to make it sound better. It could use a bit more elaboration in regards to the articles major sections.

Content evaluation

The new added content is relevant to the topic, and is up to date. It does a good job of describing the order of battle.

Tone and Balance evaluation

The tone is neutral, and appears fairly balanced, with no attempts to persuade the reader to a particular position.

Sources and References evaluation

This article does not lack for sources, and the ones that I clicked on all worked, and they appeared to be thorough.

Organization evaluation

It is fairly well-written and is concise and easy to read. I didn't notice any blatant grammatical errors, and it looked to be well organized.

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation

I think the images are fairly detailed, it looked like they existed prior to the editor working on the project. I think the current ones do a good job of illustrating the subject, and aren't too excessive.

For New Articles Only

N/A

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation

I think the intro could be expanded a bit, based on the review criteria. The section about the Opposing Forces was really interesting and detailed, and I think the section about the battle was a big improvement over the previous content.