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Good Articles Vs. Articles that Need Improvement edit
Chicken Nugget edit
- Copyedit "History" section
Trash-talk edit
- Not sure the Muhammed Ali section is relevant to the trash-talk wiki page
- Copyedit "How it is Used"
- Smack-talk section is fairly long for it being there to discern the difference between the two terms
Articles to Improve Selections edit
Tasks for Articles/Major Issues edit
Grocery Store edit
- Some sections are very large and need to be trimmed down or separated into subsections
- Companies section can be deleted entirely
- Prices subsection should be connected back to Grocery Store purpose or deleted
- Many sentences need revision for readability toward nontechnical audiences
- Grammatical errors present with comma functions and semi/colon functions
- Citations need to be the same throughout
- Missing citations need to be added or info should be deleted
Lead Belly edit
- Some of the headings are formatting differently from other headings
- Section should be added about Lead Belly's criminal record (he has murdered/attempted to murder multiple people, but this information is glazed over)
- Legacy section should be reformatted as a bulleted list
- Sentences need revision for nontechnical audiences
- Grammatical errors are present
- Citations need to be the same throughout
- Missing citations need to be added or info should be deleted