User:Charlie Sewall/Phaistos/Bibliography

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Bibliography

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  • Hawes, Charles Henry; Hawes, Harriet Boyd. 1922. Crete, The Forerunner of Greece, London and New York Harper & Brothers.
    • This book has some general information about the city and its original rediscovery. It also has a lot of details about the palace.
  • Hood, Sinclair. 1971. The Minoans; The Story of Bronze Age Crete, Praeger Publishers Inc.
    • This book follows up on the palace and city briefly and has some in depth information about pottery.
  • Papapostolou, J.A. 1981. Crete: Knossos, Phaistos, Mallia, Aghia, Triadha, Zakros, and the Herakleion Museum. Athens: CLIO Editions.
    • This book is mostly pictures and information about the palace and some artifacts. It has some artistic recreations as well.
  • Mellersh, H.E.L. 1967. Minoan Crete. Evans Brothers Limited London.
    • This book has additional information about the palace and some comparisons to other Minoan cities.
  • Hans Georg Wunderlich. 1972. The Secret of Crete. Macmillan Publishing Co., Inc.
    • This book has detailed information about rooms in the palace and what their purpose is. It also has some depictions of what rooms look like.


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Outline of proposed changes

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My article is lacking a lot of information about the palace and its layout. There are no pictures of the layout of the palace and only one or two rooms are in the article. I want to add more about the different rooms and what makes the palace different from other palaces. I also want to add a lot more about the excavation and the artifacts found in Phaistos. Most of my sources have information about the palace and excavation, which is most of what it missing in the article.


I want to reorganize most of the information that is currently in the article. A lot of the information seems to be in the wrong location within the article. There is also no section about the palace, so the information about it is spread loosely throughout the article in sections that don't require palace information. Lots of information seems to be useless and generally the article lacks citations for any information, making it difficult to tell if anything is true. I want to look for citations that match with uncited information in the article for fact checking and removal of false information. I am also looking to update the dates used in the article. I also want to change words to be less opinion oriented and to make reading the article easier. I also want to add more pictures, specifically on the palace and artifacts, to give some visual reference for the information. If I can, I want to take a look at the mythology section and see if there is more to add.