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Article evaluation edit
This is a review of the Wiki article Wang Yangming. This article discussed the philosopher's life, philosophical thinking, and influence on the later minds that are all related to the person. But the first part Life experiences can be better structured, and the article can introduce more of his works in a new section.
So far the article is in a neutral tone and no particular biased opinion noticed. Some citations at the Notes section are not complete. A few citations such as Benesch and Gillin lack year, article title, journal name, volume, page and doi.
The authors should also learn from the Chinese page of this article and translate some contents into it.