Welcome to my user page.
Bio
editA little bit about me: I'm a writer. I have been writing poetry and stories since I was 12 (2012 - present). I am also a reader, I have loved books since I was big enough to hold one. I mostly read fiction, but I do like history and science as well. My favorite author so far is Jude Deveraux [1]. I am very interested in foreign languages and traveling. I know some Japanese and French and I hope to visit France in the spring of 2018. My goal is to see the world someday.
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Some of the parts of Wikipedia I am interested in are the editing mostly. I like knowing that if I come upon a page with notes that I know to be false, it's nice to know that I am able to rectify them. Some subjects I might be interested in writing about - should I stay involved with Wikipedia - are homelessness and possibly write about some of the books I like. That is all.
Article Critique
editI visited the Piano Concertos by Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart[2], and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: the lack of citations to sources, the confusion it causes by not being specific in which concert it is speaking of, and and how the length might invite discussions about which concert is better.
Throughout the entire article, multiple facts are stated but not all have a cited source, and some that are cited do not lead to reliable source.
- ^ https://www.fantasticfiction.com, webmaster@fantasticfiction.com -. "Jude Deveraux". www.fantasticfiction.com. Retrieved 2017-10-05.
{{cite web}}: External link in|last= - ^ "Piano concertos by Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart". Wikipedia. 2017-10-06.