Analysis of Article edit
The overall content of this article is relevant to the topic and provides the reader with valuable information, however some sections of the article are relatively underdeveloped, such as the section that discusses society and culture as well as the sections that discuss fossil records and outer space, although I'm not sure how much information could be added to the last two sections. I noticed that the subsection that talks about Historic pandemics could be improved upon by adding a bullet point about the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic, although data about this pandemic is changing every day.
The article is written neutrally and no major bias is seen in the article.
Each major claim contains a citation and is backed up with a reliable source.
This article doesn't seems to discuss any major equity gaps, which is what my class and I are hoping to help contribute to by editing the society and culture section of this article.