User:B.C.Schmerker/Article Prototype3/Source Amendments

I have found evidence of grammatic problems with the original article. The paragraph in question follows. - B.C.Schmerker 13:47, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

Known facts

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  1. Mayumi Horikawa is older sister to Reimy; whether a yet older sibling exists is unknown.
  2. Both Masataka Matsutoya (松任谷正隆 Matutouya Masataka) and Yumi Matsutoya (松任谷由実 Matutouya Yumi) are actual persons with their own articles on ja.Wikipedia.org.

Preliminary correction of Source

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