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Yatai (Japanese Food Carts)
The article on Yatai food carts is well referenced with sources from a variety of years, starting in the 1980s and ending in 2016. The sources are academic sources and scholarly journals as opposed to personally owned websites. The article is not strongly biased but does repeat health concerns by the Japanese government and the knowledge of the yatai being run mostly by foreigners from Tawain or Korea. The article is subtly biased against these food carts in its repetition and uneven attention towards the problems with food carts as opposed to the good the services did for low income workers. The links work but the citations could include information collected from the Yatai cart owners and operators instead of only articles from the synoptic state view. There is no arbitrary information in the article and all is relevant to the topic.
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