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Article Evaluation Aespinosa1994 (talk) 19:06, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
Everything consisted in the article about David Wojnarowicz appears to be relevant to the topic being discussed. Although it did get a little distracting by the various people written in the article whom where not cited. Ultimately this left a feeling of confusion on who they were and what their importance was to the artist. There were a few biases noticed but the main bias that appeared was when William Donohue whom belonged to the Catholic league confessed he believed Wojnarowicz’s work in “Fire in My Belly” committed a “hate speech” against Catholics. Despite that fact overall the autobiography seemed neutral throughout. Almost all the citations except for one link did not work. They appeared to be mostly from peer reviewed journals. They supported the facts that were being claimed in the article. The main thing missing from the article were some of the people stated were not cited on who the were there was no reference. Early childhood could have been covered a little better/more throughout the article. There was not much talk about the actual article on the talkpage but more mainly the external links being modified and some additional links to information on about the artist. The article is rated at a B and is considered a good article. It is currently a part of the WikiProject for the Biography/Arts and Entertainment section, LGBT studies/persons section, New York City section, and the AIDS section. Currently it is inactive for the Contemporary art section.Aespinosa1994 (talk) 22:33, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
History of Chinese Americans in San Francisco
Added some needed citations to the article and edited some grammar corrections
A. Introduction B. History C. Geography D. Cultural Institutions C. Healthcare
C1. Prior to Healthcare C2. Struggles to establish healthcare C3. First medical facility C4. Natural Disaster
D. Education
E. Media
F. Transportation
G. Cultural Events
H. Notable people
I. References