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Problems in Articles edit
Ghost Manor edit
- The display of bullet points in sections "Characters", "Items", and "Scoring" sections
- The format of "Gameplay" section with the placement of the screenshot
- "Xonox Development" section needs to be reevaluated
- The overall tone of a "manual or guidebook" that Wikipedia has marked (WP:VGSCOPE)
Aid effectiveness edit
- The tone of a "personal reflection or opinion essay" that Wikipedia has marked (WP:NOT#ESSAY)
- The lack of subheadings in sections with blocky content
- The overall organization of the article