Template talk:Did you know nominations/Shireen Abu Akleh
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Nableezy in topic Original hook
Original hook edit
Hi Thriley, the original hook is longer than expected. Per Wikipedia:Did you know/Hook length it should be lower than 200 characters. You may try something like this:
*...that Palestinian American journalist Shireen Abu Akleh was fatally shot despite wearing a blue vest with "PRESS" written on it while covering a raid by the Israel Defense Forces in the West Bank?
Mhhossein talk 06:14, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
- @Nableezy: I think it would be better if we keep on the discussions here; How is the following?
- ...according to investigations by independent press agencies, journalist Shireen Abu Akleh (her death protest pictured) was killed by an Israel Defense Forces bullet while wearing a blue "PRESS" vest? --Mhhossein talk 14:48, 8 July 2022 (UTC)