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Everything in the article is fine except the hook. I can't say that the hook is interesting. We need something better. Mgrē@sŏn (Talk) 16:21, 13 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Added alternate hook. Mgrē@sŏn (Talk) 16:22, 15 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
