Template talk:Did you know/Paul Philidor
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Crisco 1492
Paul Philidor edit
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)
- ... that phantasmagoria showman Paul Philidor invited Marie Tussaud to share the Lyceum Theatre in London with him and, for the first time, exhibit her wax works in England?
Created by Violetriga (talk). Nominated by Violetriga (talk) at 18:07, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
What is "Remember the Phantasmagoria", and who is the author? It may not be reliable. More information is necessary. Article length and date check out. Hook length is fine, but it is difficult to parse. A check shows no major problems with paraphrasing. Could you supply a more succinct hook and fix the referencing? Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:59, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Reference fixed. Possible ALT: ... that phantasmagoria showman Paul Philidor convinced Marie Tussaud to exhibit her wax works in England? violet/riga [talk] 07:17, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- I seem to have missed that the last paragraph (death) doesn't have a reference. Just fix that and we're good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:20, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. violet/riga [talk] 11:30, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- I seem to have missed that the last paragraph (death) doesn't have a reference. Just fix that and we're good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:20, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Reference fixed. Possible ALT: ... that phantasmagoria showman Paul Philidor convinced Marie Tussaud to exhibit her wax works in England? violet/riga [talk] 07:17, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
Good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:13, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
