Template talk:Did you know/Open House (Breaking Bad)

Open House (Breaking Bad)

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!)

• ... that the song "If I Had a Heart" by Fever Ray (pictured) was featured for the Breaking Bad episode "Open House" because it matched the "full, heavy darkness" of its scene?

• Reviewed: The Drug in Me Is You ([1])
• Comment: Although listed as "expanded", it is essentially a new article because it was created from a redirect.

5x expanded by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self nom at 01:58, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook

• Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Source: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Interest: Not bad, could be better. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Image suitability, if applicable: Doesn't seem all that good at 100px, too out of focus and the colour is shot. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Article

• Length: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Vintage: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): I think you should have a separate footnotes and bibliography section, since just having "Gilligan" isn't clear. Seem reliable enough. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Neutrality:
• Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: None apparent. AGF on offline sources. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Copyvio: FUR is valid, other images are free. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:

• Could you just clean up the references a bit? Everything else is okay. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
  • I've added a separate bibliography section. This uses the {{Harvnb}} template similar to previous FAs and GAs I've done, like Tender Mercies and The Incredible Melting Man. I think it addresses the concern you've raised but if it doesn't, let me know. — Hunter Kahn 16:05, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Changes to referencing checked and approved by me: Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 23:06, 13 August 2011 (UTC)