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Jeanne L. Noble

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The result was: promoted by Sharktopus ^talk

• ... that Jeanne L. Noble performed the first studies of African American women in college?

• Reviewed: Thomas S. Pettit

Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 23:27, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

• Length, date, hook, references check out. Everything looks good, except for the word "performed" which irks me. What about saying that "Jeanne L. Noble published the first studies about African American women in college?" Viriditas (talk) 07:44, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

• I agree with Viriditas' wording. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:02, 17 August 2011 (UTC)

• ALT1:... that Jeanne L. Noble published the first studies about African American women in college?

• Good ALT1. Binksternet (talk) 04:49, 17 August 2011 (UTC)

• ALT1 is much superior to the original hook, due to the ambiguity of "performed." --Orlady (talk) 13:51, 17 August 2011 (UTC)