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The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 01:23, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Yogo sapphire edit

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A 0.43 carat pear-shaped cornflower blue Yogo sapphire.

  • ALT1:... that a marketing campaign for Yogo sapphires (pictured) exposed the scandal of heat treating gemstones?
  • ALT2:... that Jake Hoover, who thought Yogo sapphires (pictured) might be valuable, sent them off for evaluation to Tiffany's in a cigar box?
  • Reviewed: SMS Breslau
  • Comment: This was in a user sandbox from 25 Oct to Nov 06, 2011, when it was moved to mainspace, becoming DYK eligible on Nov 6 as it's also over 24K of prose today. Log here

Created/expanded by PumpkinSky (talk), Montanabw (talk). Nominated by PumpkinSky (talk) at 22:16, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

  • The first hook is a problem because the word diamond is only found in the WP:LEAD. The LEAD is suppose to be a summary of more detailed content found later in the article and should not include any content not found later in the main body.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:22, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
That can easily be fixed but for me it's late and I can work it tomorrow. Montanabw or anyone else can work that too. PumpkinSky talk 03:27, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
I added a blurb on the rarer than diamond thing into the body of the article in the Mineralogy section. Montanabw(talk) 03:50, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
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