Template:Did you know nominations/Yale University endowment

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:15, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

Yale University endowment edit

Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 02:11, 12 July 2017 (UTC).

  • New enough and long enough. The article is neutral and written from sources. No QPQ required. The hook is interesting and accurate, though I have a minor quibble. The hook notes that the plan was scrutinized, "in part", because of the 1745 act. Is this talking about legal scrutiny, or the mix of legal/political opposition to the idea when it was floated? Yale didn't scrutinize the plan; it objected to it. The article itself only discusses Yale's objection, which rests in part on legal objections (grounded in the 1745 act) and in part on political objections. The hook as written doesn't make clear who is scrutinizing/objecting. Otherwise we're good to go. Mackensen (talk) 12:48, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Thanks, that's clearer. ALT1 good to go. Mackensen (talk) 18:52, 12 July 2017 (UTC)