Template:Did you know nominations/William Aitken (architect)
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William Aitken (architect), George W. Stoddard, J. Lister Holmes, John T. Jacobsen
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- ... that William Aitken, William J. Bain, J. Lister Holmes, John T. Jacobsen, and George W. Stoddard collaborated in the early 1940s to design the nation's first racially integrated housing development?
- Source: https://pcad.lib.washington.edu/building/5319/ Pacific Coast Architecture Database, University of Washington.
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Created by Generalissima (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 73 past nominations.
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:39, 21 August 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:51, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Nice work. Some minor issues. First, should the hook specify that it is the first racially integrated public housing development to match what the sources say? Also, in J. Lister Holmes, I read
In 1940, he was tasked by the Seattle Housing Authority to serve as the chief architect of the Yesler Terrace development, the first public housing development in the United States.
That doesn't sound right, given that the hook is referring to it as the first racially-integrated one? Clear these two things up and it should be good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:25, 22 August 2024 (UTC)