Template:Did you know nominations/Willi Mentz

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:31, 19 November 2013 (UTC)

Willi Mentz edit

Created by Poeticbent (talk). Self nominated at 23:52, 25 October 2013 (UTC).

  • The article contains significant close paraphrasing, and some direct copying, of this source. See this Duplication Detector report for some examples, but bear in mind that the report doesn't pick up every instance of close paraphrasing; every sentence in the article will have to be manually checked, and reworded if necessary. DoctorKubla (talk) 17:30, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
The article contains quotation in quotation marks (Duplication Detector indicated copying which is fine). I fixed that quote by adding i-linked name of the author also. Other three longer ones are the actual full titles of the source pages picked up by Duplication Detector from the References section. I reworded the remaining few short clusters, not to be too similar. The usual challenge with short bios is that the sources leave too little room for manouver. Anyhow, thanks for the review, DoctorKubla. – All done, Poeticbent talk 20:05, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
Okay, close paraphrasing taken care of. The article is new enough, long enough, and well sourced; the hook is interesting and accurate; and QPQ has been completed. Ready to go. (Sorry this wasn't reviewed in time for the Day of the Dead.) DoctorKubla (talk) 08:28, 19 November 2013 (UTC)