Template:Did you know nominations/Willem Pleyte, Cornelis Marinus Pleyte, Ethnographic Museum Artis

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:57, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Willem Pleyte, Cornelis Marinus Pleyte, Ethnographic Museum Artis edit

Willem Pleyte

Created/expanded by Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 02:46, 29 October 2012 (UTC)

  • Added an image from the article Willem Pleyte posted on DYK on 27th Oct.--Nvvchar. 16:43, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

Reviewed Neal Purvis and Robert Wade, Sheikh Badr Cemetery, Holmes County Courthouse (Ohio)

Starting review. Yazan (talk) 06:25, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
  • Willem Pleyte: Date, length and sources check out.
  • Cornelis Marinus Pleyte: Date and length check out. However the article is hardly sourced. There is only one inline citation and it is misleading, as it sources only one sentence rather than the rest of the paragraph. Furthermore this source says that he was a director, and it makes a point in differentiating "board members" from "directors". More on hook later.
  • Ethnographic Museum Artis: Date, length and sources check out.
  • Hook: As I said earlier, the hook doesn't seem to be supported by the refs. William was on the board, his son, however, was a director. Do correct me if I'm wrong though, the two are not interchangeable.
Sourcing for the Cornelios article; hook verification issues. Yazan (talk) 06:32, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
  • I've added refs to the Cornelis article. --Rosiestep (talk) 22:37, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Looks fine to me - date, length, sourcing, copyright, hook etc. All hooks are o.k. but I am inclined to favor ALT1. I don't see that "brill" is really going to catch anyone's attention, and ALT1 is shortest. Aymatth2 (talk) 01:35, 26 November 2012 (UTC)