Template:Did you know nominations/Wikana

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The result was: rejected by sst✈ 02:15, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
No attempt to fix a concern pointed out almost 3 weeks ago

Wikana

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• ... that young man who threatened Sukarno if the latter didn't declare the independence immediately, after the 30 September Movement was abducted and went missing?

Created by Anakmari (talk). Self-nominated at 02:23, 6 September 2015 (UTC).

• That hook makes no sense whatsoever. Please reword it. As for the article, I review earliest first, so I'll have a look in due course.--Launchballer 15:27, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

• Nominator has not responded to the above, and indeed has not edited since September 12 nor responded to a talk-page ping. Marking for closure as unsuccessful. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:35, 9 October 2015 (UTC)