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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:42, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
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Well-Strung
... that string quartet Well-Strung has performed for Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton, and two members competed on The Amazing Race?[1], [2], [3]- ALT1:
... that string quartet Well-Strung's song "Chelsea's Mom" was a reimagining of "Stacy's Mom" about Hillary Clinton?[4] and others
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- Reviewed: Clara Schumann
Created by Paul2520 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:50, 19 October 2019 (UTC).
Interesting group on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I like both hooks, but think best would be a combination, the ALT but mentioning that they played it for her. Article: I did some copy-editing, please check the steps. I don't need more than 3 refs for one fact. No refs are required as long as a summary of sourced information in the body. How do you feel about an infobox? Guess who wrote the Palladio article ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:20, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: copy editing looks good. Thanks for that. I added an infobox. How's this for a new hook?
- ALT2:...
that string quartet Well-Strung has performed for Barack Obama and the Vatican, and sang "Chelsea's Mom", a reimagining of "Stacy's Mom", for Hillary Clinton?
- = paul2520 (talk) 13:11, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for the changes and ALT2 which I like better than the former ones, so striking those. I'd prefer a condensed version (because we want to focus, and not on Obama and the Vatican):
- ALT3: ... that string quartet Well-Strung has performed "Chelsea's Mom", a reimagining of "Stacy's Mom", for Hillary Clinton?
In ALT2, please explain - just for my understanding - what "sung" means for string players. If they also sing, that should come out more in the article. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:25, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: ALT3 looks good to me! Yes, they also sing, but I think "performed" is more encompassing. Thanks. = paul2520 (talk) 13:43, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
