Template:Did you know nominations/Violated Paradise
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:29, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
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Violated Paradise
edit- ... that the 1963 film Violated Paradise is based on Fosco Maraini's work L' Isola Delle Pescatrici?
- Reviewed: Francis: Pray for me
Created by Skr15081997 (talk). Self-nominated at 05:19, 20 September 2015 (UTC).
long enough article on good sources, but I confess that I miss a bit of the tension that the title creates in both article and hook. For a film, shouldn't we mention in the hook the director rather than the author of the work it's based on, and that work's title in a language not everybody will understand, and hinting at Italy, not Japan? In the plot: where does sex-exploitation, mentioned in the lead, come into play? All information in the lead should appear in the body, with the reference there. If possible: a hook ALT1 mentioning pearl-diving an/or Japan. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:06, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
- Japanese female pearl divers were shown in several of the scenes. As you can see here, this film was for adults only. Here's another hook:-
- ALT1 : ... that the 1963 film Violated Paradise, featuring female pearl divers was filmed entirely in Japan?--Skr15081997 (talk) 13:28, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
- "Adults only" doesn't lead necessarily to sex exploitation, which is still not obvious in the plot, or what did I miss. ALT1 is sourced, but now we miss Italy altogether, how about a combination:
- ALT2 : ... that the 1963 film Violated Paradise, based on Fosco Maraini's L' Isola Delle Pescatrici, features female pearl divers in Japan? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:53, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
- No issues, this hook includes both of the previous ones.--Skr15081997 (talk) 13:57, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
all, prefer the combination ALT2, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:15, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
- No issues, this hook includes both of the previous ones.--Skr15081997 (talk) 13:57, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
