- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by sovereign°sentinel (contribs) 09:48, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
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Utica, New York edit
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Utica, New York
- ... that a city in New York (pictured) might have gotten its name after being picked from a hat?
- ALT1: ... that the Lewis gun, used heavily by the British Army during World War I, was produced by Savage Arms in Utica, New York (pictured)?
- ALT2: ... that Utica, New York (pictured) was a worldwide hub for the textile industry throughout the 19th and 20th centuries?
- Comment: This is the second nomination of Utica, NY; the first was here.
Improved to Good Article status by Buffaboy (talk). Self-nominated at 22:51, 25 August 2015 (UTC).
Recently promoted to GA, well written, within policy and inline cited, ALT1 and ALT2 are better than ALT0, and QPQ's not required here. It's good to go. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 02:42, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks! I looked in the prep area ands it looks like Utica will be exposed twice with the Adirondack Railway. Buffaboy talk 22:09, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
- I think ALT0 is better, it's shorter and I think it would be more interesting to the average reader (a weirdish theory vs the history of manufacturing). Rainbow unicorn (talk) 21:28, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
- If it's not too late, I'd also suggest for Alt 3:
- ALT 3: ... that Utica, New York (pictured) was once larger than Chicago, Detroit, and Cleveland? Buffaboy talk 22:44, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
- Great! Restoring the tick for ALT3. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 02:08, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
- If it's not too late, I'd also suggest for Alt 3:
- I think ALT0 is better, it's shorter and I think it would be more interesting to the average reader (a weirdish theory vs the history of manufacturing). Rainbow unicorn (talk) 21:28, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
