Wikipedia

Template:Did you know nominations/True Love (Kanye West and XXXTentacion song)

< Template:Did you know nominations
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 18:56, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

DYK toolbox

True Love (Kanye West and XXXTentacion song)

(
)

Improved to Good Article status by Kyle Peake (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 20:55, 22 October 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - It might be worth expanding the hook just slightly, to include mention of the fact that the handwritten notes were scanned posthumously from a journal belonging to XXXTentacion. I think that makes the hook more interesting.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: —Matthew - (talk) 03:44, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

@MatthewHoobin: How about "... that the cover art for "True Love" features handwritten notes by XXXTentacion that were posthumously scanned from one of his journals?" Onegreatjoke (talk) 03:48, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: That sounds good to me, but I would change "contains" to "features". Thoughts? —Matthew - (talk) 04:02, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
@MatthewHoobin: Yeah it's definitely better to change it. Changed the hook. Onegreatjoke (talk) 04:06, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
Then I have no further suggestions. Cheers! —Matthew - (talk) 04:08, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Template:Did_you_know_nominations/True_Love_(Kanye_West_and_XXXTentacion_song)&oldid=1119103929"