- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 09:45, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
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Tom Ford (song)
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- ... that "Tom Ford", the second single from Jay-Z's twelfth studio album Magna Carta Holy Grail, is an ode to fashion designer Tom Ford (pictured)?
5x expanded by STATicVapor (talk). Self nominated at 08:33, 18 October 2013 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough, and well sourced. However, there are some bare urls that need formatting, and some blatant plagiarism in the "Production" section – "starts out hinting at Radiohead's "Kid A" and turns into a thicket of synthesizers", and "constructed out of machine gun sprays, Nintendo themes and bottle blows". These phrases need to be reworded or put in quote marks. The hook's fine (I've delinked it a bit), the image is freely licensed, and the nominator has only one DYK credit so QPQ isn't required. Once the issues I've mentioned are addressed, we'll be good to go. DoctorKubla (talk) 16:35, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
- @DoctorKubla: Thank you for the review, I had thought this nomination had been lost to never be reviewed. Well, I believe I fixed all the issues you detailed, copy edited the production section and expanded the three refs that Reflinks missed when I created the page. STATic message me! 16:51, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
Alright, good work. DoctorKubla (talk) 10:07, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
- @DoctorKubla: Thank you for the review, I had thought this nomination had been lost to never be reviewed. Well, I believe I fixed all the issues you detailed, copy edited the production section and expanded the three refs that Reflinks missed when I created the page. STATic message me! 16:51, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
