Template:Did you know nominations/Tiny Town (miniature park)

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:54, 5 July 2016 (UTC)

Tiny Town (miniature park)

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Tiny Town house
Tiny Town house
  • ... that Tiny Town (model house shown) was the first complete miniature city constructed?

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 09:52, 21 June 2016 (UTC).

  • ALT1 - ... that Tiny Town (model house shown) was the first complete modern city built in miniature? --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:54, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Date, length, hook, age, and everything else checks out. I would suggest ALT1 as the phrasing is a little clearer, but otherwise very interesting. The image is also appropriate as it illustrates the hook. Aoba47 (talk) 05:07, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

As originator I withdraw my original hook - since I also prefer ALT1.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:58, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Tweaked grammar in ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 22:17, 27 June 2016 (UTC)