Template:Did you know nominations/Thol Lake

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:41, 14 May 2015 (UTC)

Thol Lake edit

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... that the Thol Lake also known as the Thol Bird Sanctuary is a habitat to 150 species of birds of which the two most prominent species are flamingoes (pictured) and sarus crane (Grus antigone)?

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5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 05:26, 18 April 2015 (UTC).

size ok, age ok, Earwig's negative, hook is ungainly, why not say "..is key habitat for sarus crane, ruff and flamingoes" or something. Source does not say they are prominent and hook as is is ungainly. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 7 May 2015 (UTC)2

@Casliber: Thanks for the review I propose this ALt2 hook ... that the Thol Lake, also known as the Thol Bird Sanctuary, (pictured) is a key habitat for sarus crane (Grus antigone), ruff and flamingoes?--Nvvchar. 12:44, 7 May 2015 (UTC)

yep, looks good to me. We're in business. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:50, 7 May 2015 (UTC)