Template:Did you know nominations/Thinkhaya III of Toungoo
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:13, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
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Thinkhaya III of Toungoo
edit... that Gov. Thinkhaya III of Toungoo declared independence from Ava but did not proclaim the regal white umbrella befitting Burmese sovereigns?
- ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link], or briefly cite, the source)
- Reviewed: Osiris: New Dawn
Created by Hybernator (talk). Self-nominated at 00:10, 3 October 2016 (UTC).
- "did not proclaim the regal white umbrella" -- how do you proclaim an umbrella? EEng 03:50, 6 October 2016 (UTC)
- Corrected hook based on article:
- ALT1:
... that governor Thinkhaya III of Toungoo declared independence from Ava but refused to install the white umbrella–a key part of the regalia of Burmese sovereigns–in his palace?Yoninah (talk) 20:16, 6 October 2016 (UTC)
- Another idea:
- ALT2: ... that after breaking from Ava, Thinkhaya III of Toungoo built his own palace–but left out the regal white umbrella? Yoninah (talk) 20:21, 6 October 2016 (UTC)
- I meant "did not claim the regal white umbrella". Anyway, I prefer ALT2 by Yoninah. Thanks! Hybernator (talk) 18:28, 7 October 2016 (UTC)
Ready for full review. Yoninah (talk) 20:45, 8 October 2016 (UTC)
*The article is new and large enough. It is cited and neutral. Hooks ALT2 is in the article. It has an inline citation to an offline unconfirmable (by me) source. I am not actually able to confirm this is not a hoax. Copyvio check finds nothing at all. QPQ performed. AGF good to go. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 05:46, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
