Template:Did you know nominations/The Late Bloomer
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The result was: promoted by sstflyer 16:43, 27 September 2015 (UTC)
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The Late Bloomer edit
... that The Late Bloomer is the re-imagining comedy of Ken Baker's real life, who goes through his puberty at the age of 27?
- ALT1:
... that Kevin Pollak is making his narrative directing debut with The Late Bloomer, after previously attached Randall Einhorn left the project? - Reviewed:
SoonEmha Ainun Nadjib
- ALT1:
Created by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self-nominated at 11:28, 27 August 2015 (UTC).
The original hook, which was the one promoted, is incomprehensible to me: what is a "re-imagining comedy"? (I think I know what's intended, now that I've read the article, but that isn't what this says.) ALT1 I found uninteresting, so rather substituting it, I've struck it (and the original); a new hook needs to be found. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:16, 8 September 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the comedy The Late Bloomer was inspired by Ken Baker, who went through puberty at the age of 27?
- @BlueMoonset: It's good now. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 08:30, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
New reviewer needed to check new ALT2, and also to check items not covered in the original review, such as close paraphrasing and neutrality. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:27, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. ALT2 is well-sourced, the article is neutral and I detected no close-paraphrasing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:01, 27 September 2015 (UTC)