Template:Did you know nominations/The Indestructibles

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:23, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

The Indestructibles edit

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... that two circumpolar stars known as The Indestructibles marked heaven as a destination for the Ancient Egyptian pharaohs?

5x expanded by Manytexts (talk) and Rich Farmbrough (talk). Self nominated (by Manytexts) at 10:22, 20 January 2015 (UTC).

The prior revision is 783 prose bytes. The current revision is 2,276 bytes. The fivefold is supposed to be 3,915 bytes. I'll give you at least a week to expand the article. George Ho (talk) 00:14, 21 January 2015 (UTC)

I see a little more expansion. Current revision is 3,182 bytes. George Ho (talk) 08:53, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

Alas, the current revision is 3,974 bytes, passing the fivefold minimum requirement. I was gonna use a red icon until I see some uncited statements. Can anyone here resolve this? George Ho (talk) 19:21, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

Issues have been resolved, the sourcing and the expansion. Needs re-review. George Ho (talk) 17:15, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

George Ho's prior reviews have established newness and length. A couple of sentences appear to lack references: the last sentence of "Terminology", the first sentence of "Astronomy", and the last sentence of "Pyramid design". Spot checks reveal no copyvios (although the text retained from before the expansion seems to have already been copied elsewhere on the Internet). I did some tightening of the hook, which follows guidelines. QPQ needed since Rich Farmborough already has five DYK credits. Should be ready to go when the extra references and QPQ are done. Antony–22 (^talk⁄_contribs) 22:16, 3 March 2015 (UTC)

I have five DYK credits? News to me! Also note that I did not nominate this article, merely fixed it up (along with Template:Did you know nominations/Clancy's) after seeing it here, as a kind of voluntary quid pro quo for Whittington's Longhouse. All the best: Rich Farmbrough, 16:03, 8 March 2015 (UTC).

Yep, see [1]. Though you're right, only the nominator counts for this. Still need minor referencing upgrades. Antony–22 (^talk⁄_contribs) 18:08, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Have improved the referencing, and added a little more content. All the best: Rich Farmbrough, 03:19, 11 March 2015 (UTC).

Awesome then. Antony–22 (^talk⁄_contribs) 05:09, 11 March 2015 (UTC)