Template:Did you know nominations/Tessa Hughes-Freeland
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 03:18, 6 September 2014 (UTC)
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Tessa Hughes-Freeland edit
... that experimental filmmaker Tessa Hughes-Freeland describes her work as "confrontational, transgressive, provocative and poetic"?
- ALT1:... that experimental filmmaker Tessa Hughes-Freeland's films include Baby Doll, Dirty and Nymphomania?
- Reviewed: Chandler State Wayside
- Comment: Created at the Wikipedia:SHE MUST BE WIKI: Feminist Film Wiki-a-thon
Created by Selina robertson (talk), Shiningroad (talk), Edwardx (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 21:59, 1 August 2014 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough and uses in-line citations. The hook facts are short enough and interesting. QPQ done. However, the hook facts are problematic. Th original hook is problematic in that it is not clear that the quote comes from Hughes-Freeland; it is on her web-site but it's written in the third-person and isn't attributed to her. The alt hook is not contained in the body of the article and isn't supported by an in-line citation. Cbl62 (talk) 04:42, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
I have struck the main hook as it has no reliable source. I have extended the article and got rid of some of the quotes. The first alt is now sourced. This woman specialised in making films that were designed to shock. Finding a hook should be easy although do remember that its going on the front page, so think about the talk page debate. Copy edit required and a review please. Victuallers (talk) 19:24, 27 August 2014 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT1 hook is acceptable and has inline citations. QPQ has been done and I detected no policy issues. I have added Victuallers name to the credits. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 5 September 2014 (UTC)
