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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 15:18, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
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Televisa Radio edit
- ... that Televisa Radio attempted to merge with two of its principal competitors in 2000, only to have both deals fall through?
- Reviewed: Dave Albright
- Comment: Most—but not all—sources in Spanish.
5x expanded by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 03:00, 21 May 2016 (UTC).
The article doesn't exactly say Grupo Radio Centro and Grupo ACIR were two of Televisa's principal competitors. Can you add that to the article? Also, I think a reference snould be added to the end of "acquisition failed due to marketplace concerns". Random86 (talk) 05:59, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
- @Random86: I've made all the suggested wording changes, and this:
- ALT1: ... that Televisa Radio attempted to merge with two of its principal competitors in 2000, only to have both acquisition bids fail? Raymie (t • c) 06:05, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
Article has been sufficiently expanded and is long enough. It is neutral and has inline citations. Most sources are offline and/or in Spanish, so I cannot check for plagiarism. Hooks are interesting and neutral (AGF on offline sources). QPQ done. Both hooks are good to go! Random86 (talk) 06:45, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
- Citations are needed for the fact that each of the stations were "major competitors". Yoninah (talk) 22:46, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
