Template:Did you know nominations/Swarmjet

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:21, 13 December 2016 (UTC)

Swarmjet edit

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self-nominated at 14:52, 7 November 2016 (UTC).

  • @Maury Markowitz: New and long enough, within policy, Earwig detects no copyvios. I don't see that the nominator actually reviewed the cited QPQ. I'd suggest a slight alteration to the hook, noting that it involves firing thousands of unguided rockets, since not everyone immediately knows what a shotgun blast is. Antony–22 (talkcontribs) 02:48, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
Changed. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:18, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
@Maury Markowitz: Thanks for the change, looks good. However, I still don't see a substantive review at the listed QPQ link; you should provide another one. Antony–22 (talkcontribs) 02:51, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
@Maury Markowitz: Pinging. Valid QPQ still needed. Antony–22 (talkcontribs) 23:17, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
@Antony-22: I have no idea which I have and have not used any more, so lets try M16 Multiple Gun Motor Carriage. Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:57, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
QPQ done. I put the shotgun part back into the hook, it's good as long as it's explained. Good to go. Antony–22 (talkcontribs) 17:28, 9 December 2016 (UTC)