Template:Did you know nominations/Sunset Overdrive

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:14, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

Sunset Overdrive

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  • ... that players can fire teddy bears strapped to sticks of dynamite in Sunset Overdrive?

Improved to Good Article status by AdrianGamer (talk). Self-nominated at 13:57, 18 December 2015 (UTC).

  • Article is well referenced and neutral. Promoted to GA on 18 December 2015, the same day as this nomination. QPQ looks good. Both hooks are sourced and of suitable length, but I personally prefer the main hook; it seems more interesting somehow. This is good to go! Great work. – Rhain1999 (talk to me) 16:00, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but do not find that the hook corresponds to the article or the sources. The hook implies that players are shooting at teddy bears, but the sources indicate that they're firing or launching the teddy bears. Yoninah (talk) 21:37, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
@Yoninah: Seems to be a case of how one interprets the text. I've changed the word "shoot" to "fire"; does this make it clearer? – Rhain1999 (talk to me) 23:47, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Yes, that's better, thanks. Restoring tick per your review. Yoninah (talk) 13:13, 3 January 2016 (UTC)