- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Allen3 talk 09:29, 30 July 2016 (UTC)
Insufficient progress toward resolving outstanding issues
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Studio 8H
edit- ... that at the time of construction, Studio 8H was the world's largest radio studio?
- ALT1:... that at the time of construction, the 9000 cubic meter Studio 8H was the world's largest radio studio?
- ALT2:... that at the time of its 1933 construction, the 9000 cubic meter Studio 8H was the world's largest radio studio?
Converted from a redirect by StewdioMACK (talk). Self-nominated at 09:34, 16 June 2016 (UTC).
- Comment All three hooks could be made more concise by removing "at the time of construction," and instead stating that it was "once the world's largest radio studio". Edwardx (talk) 09:56, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
Assuming that this isn't already taken: Article is new enough and old enough. The date 1950 isn't mentioned in the source given, and the "Two episodes" sources don't mention this particular studio. Most of the history section appears to be unsourced. Didn't notice any copyvio/plagiarism issues. Hook(s) are sourced with inline citations, I agree with Edwardx's comments though. First hook is best in terms of avoiding unnecessary detail. QPQ not needed with only 3 DKYs. The sourcing issues need to be resolved, though.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 15:29, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
- @StewdioMACK: You need to attend to the points raised in the review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:55, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: I'll be looking at the article very soon. StewdioMACK (talk) 15:05, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
- ALT3:... that the 9000 cubic meter Studio 8H was once the world's largest radio studio? StewdioMACK (talk) 07:30, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
- Comment All three hooks could be made more concise by removing "at the time of construction," and instead stating that it was "once the world's largest radio studio". Edwardx (talk) 09:56, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
Better hook, but the sourcing issues still need resolving.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 09:28, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
Marking for closure; sourcing issues still not resolved after over six weeks. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:40, 29 July 2016 (UTC)
