Template:Did you know nominations/Spencer Cox

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 12:01, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Spencer Cox edit

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... that HIV/AIDS activist Spencer Cox designed a clinical trial that resulted in the approval of a protease inhibitor, though he studied theater in college?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Pirates of Orion

Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 20:06, 7 October 2013 (UTC).

"though he studied theater in college" reads like a non-sequitor to me, I think the hook is perfectly adequate without the phrase. Gatoclass (talk) 14:49, 8 October 2013 (UTC)

Possibly. I wanted to get across the point that he's not a scientist, though maybe there's a better way to do that. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:37, 8 October 2013 (UTC)

ALT1... that HIV/AIDS activist Spencer Cox designed a clinical trial that resulted in the approval of a protease inhibitor?

Article is new enough and long enough. Both hooks are suitably cited and either will do. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:25, 31 October 2013 (UTC)