Template:Did you know nominations/Special Service Medal (Canada)
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:45, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Special Service Medal (Canada) edit
- ... that the Canadian Special Service Medal may be awarded under such varied criteria as service with the United Nations or NATO, serving in the Canadian Arctic at CFS Alert, or service as a Canadian Ranger?
- Reviewed: Edo Neo-Confucianism
Created/expanded by EricSerge (talk). Self nom at 17:13, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
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Paraphrasing check shows problems. Government works in Canada are under crown copyright, so they still need to be paraphrased. Information about the ribbon is not cited. Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:52, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
- Okay, so I went through and better paraphrased or streamlined problem areas. Duplication Detector still shows some duplication, but most of these are name of missions, military organizations, or snippets of requirements set out within regulations that it would be difficult to maintain coherent meaning if they were dramatically changed. Let me know what you think. EricSerge (talk) 20:20, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
I've done some further touch ups. Paraphrasing is acceptable now. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:01, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
