Template:Did you know nominations/South-East Asia campaign of Rajendra Chola I

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 00:27, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

South-East Asia campaign of Rajendra Chola I edit

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... that the Medieval Chola king Rajendra Chola I sent a naval expedition to South-East Asia in 1025?

Created/expanded by Ravichandar84 (talk). Self nom at 16:45, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

Did he send or undertake the expedition.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:01, 11 January 2012 (UTC)

The prasasti states that Rajendra Chola I sent the expedition. This is also supported by popular tradition. Modified the sentence in the lead accordingly.-Ravi_{My Tea Kadai} 17:04, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Hook: Short enough, interesting enough, verb needs to be clarified (as noted by Tony, you have two very different verbs)

Article: This needs a good copyedit. New and long enough. Referenced thoroughly. AGF on offline sources.

Summary:

Needs a copyedit and clarification of the hook. I'll try and do the copyedit tomorrow. Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:26, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

I think you have made the proper adjustment in the hook. Date, length and ref are all good. I think the text is high enough quality for DYK. I don't see that any further copyedit is required. Of course, I could be convinced otherwise by a good rationale.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:24, 12 January 2012 (UTC)