Template:Did you know nominations/Shavarsh Krissian

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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:26, 24 February 2013 (UTC).

Shavarsh Krissian edit

Created/expanded by Proudbolsahye (talk). Self nom at 23:43, 4 February 2013 (UTC)

  • Article is new? Yup! Article is sufficiently large? Yup! Two minor problems: First, the article uses the present tense in a few cases, such as "he returns to Constantinople", which should say "he returned to Constantinople". This should be fixed throughout the article before it appears on the main page. Second, the article says and its sources say that Krissian published the magazine and that he was the editor for the magazine, but the hook says that he was the writer. I suggest simply changing "writer" to "editor" in the proposed hook. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 15:00, 23 February 2013 (UTC)