- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:38, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
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Shang Yue edit
... that North Korean leader Kim Il Sung credited his Chinese teacher Shang Yue (pictured) with having influenced him?
- Reviewed: Kek Lok Si
- Comment: moved to mainspace on April 20
Created by Ceosad (talk) and Finnusertop (talk). Nominated by Zanhe (talk) at 19:11, 27 April 2015 (UTC).
- Comment: For the specifics of these influences (as inquired in an edit summary), see With the Century#Overview. Finnusertop (talk | guestbook | contribs) 23:03, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
- I'd really like to see some of that imported into the article nominated here, so that that hook can say something specific. EEng (talk) 20:14, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
- Done. It's a good suggestion; I've spelled out those influences now. There's a lot more from where this came from, as Kim devotes an entire section to this in With the Century. Finnusertop (talk | guestbook | contribs) 05:56, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
- I'd really like to see some of that imported into the article nominated here, so that that hook can say something specific. EEng (talk) 20:14, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The image is in the public domain. The hook fact is cited, the article is neutral and I detected no policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:14, 23 May 2015 (UTC)
- Can we please have an alt that says something about the nature of this influence? It's a commonplace that teachers influence their students. EEng (talk) 06:25, 23 May 2015 (UTC)
- Alt proposal: ... that North Korean leader Kim Il-sung credited his Chinese teacher Shang Yue (pictured) with having introduced him to Chinese classics and Russian literature? Finnusertop (talk | guestbook | contribs) 23:23, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
See how much better that is? With your permission I'm striking ALT0. EEng (talk) 00:09, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
- New hook is much better. I thought at first that the part about Russian literature was unsourced, but it's in the next footnote two sentences down, so that's ok. Good to go with alternative hook, I think. —David Eppstein (talk) 20:00, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
